Okay, so this is my first critique, and I have a lot to say about this beautiful artwork.
First of all, this is very cute and very detailed. Second of all, the night sky is very dreamy. I am a huge fan of kawaii (Japanese for cute) artwork and this will look very well on a print. I am very impressed with the shading and the different colors of the picture, again, another picture that has blown me away. Also, the shine on the different parts of the picture are in the right places and they look really well in lighting.
I am melted by the cuteness of the little girl and her pet peeking behind that book. I hope to see more from you, Ms. ehbi. 5 stars for all.