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C: Manateeman

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I'm pretty sure his username has nothing to do with this character? 
i need to practice men more OTL OTL OTL 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Im really glad you are trying to improve!, getting out of the comfort zone is an important thing c:.(it's my first time writing a serious critique so dont take it so seriously lmao(?)).

The colours are ok, yes, we can see that it has been difficult to draw this face, BUT I CONGRATULATE YOU for doing it anyway, thats the way C:.

Apparently the light is coming from the front of the face of this boy, but the shadow of the hat is not reflected on his face, wich thing is a mistake. The eye should be upper and not too stuck with the nose. The extremes of the Mouth are odd :s. Still i think the rest of the face is ok, it's hard drawing more realistic faces!.

The hat style IS SUPERB, i like its design and lighting, good job on that*thumbs up*, the hair has its own style and i clearly don't see problem at all with that ^^. The fur is well done, still looks like it got stuck in the mid painting phase and it should be polished.

I think the entire drawing is good!, the point of weakness here is the face, the rest is cool, im expectant to see your improvement and practise everytime you upload!, please dont give up!, you have so much potential C:.